Her feet wouldn’t move; welded to the floor they were. She knew she needed to leave the bedroom, wanted to most desperately. But those feet were stuck in mud, or concrete. She looked down to check but the pink socks with the dirty fluffy soles were quite free of shackles.
His voice – hoarse from shouting – was still for some seconds. The silence more scary than the hateful words directed at the back of her head on the pillow a few moments before.
She had stopped arguing. Stopped trying to reason. He had an answer for everything, and was always right. He was so hard done by, he’d shouted. And he’d punched the wooden sections on the door to illustrate his frustrations. He had never hit her and was proud of the fact he would never hit a woman. The door beading had given way at one end, but the old pine held firm at the other and she watched as he knocked it back in place. Hide it from the kids.
“I want to sleep now. We will talk in the morning.” She heard the words leave her mouth and something willed her feet to finally move towards the door.
“Why don’t you sleep in the marital bed? Hey? Hey?” He was off again, pushing himself up from the edge of the bed, pupils dilated with anger.
Those few steps gained her some courage and suddenly she was out on the landing, passing him. It would be ok. He would sleep it off, the gin, and wake the nicer version.
“I’ll see you in the morning.” more calmly than she felt, she closed the door of the spare bedroom, old wallpaper from years of tiny people showing her the way to the single bed. She wobbled a little as the adrenalin started to falter, and felt for the edge of the duvet in the dark, soft and inviting between her fingers. She fought the urge to cry.
The cool sheets felt good as she extended her toes down between the unslept-in linen… and then heard floorboards move next door. She stopped and held her breath, praying he would slump into his bed and leave her alone.
The brass door knob moved; it turned and clicked and the door gently opened. His form clearly visible with the hall light behind, he stood in silence, filling the space.
Her heartbeat was bursting from her ears, she was sure he’d be able to hear it. From somewhere she found the strength to speak calmly, “what are you doing – go to sleep.” She then laid down and faced away; faced the wall and placed her cold and shaking fingers between her thighs and wished she was wearing more than a T-shirt. Jamming her jaws together, she lay there, determined her body should gain the sleep it deserved.
Some moments passed. He stood and stared. She could just tell he had not moved. Anger bubbled away, how dare he do this. She was conversant from her research that she should be free to sleep in her own home without fear. And yet here she was scared out of her mind. It was her fault he was drunk and angry. According to him. But she was determined to talk in the morning, when the sunlight in the kitchen made everything seem far less sinister.
“I want to go to sleep!” She could bear it no longer, and begged him to leave.
“Go ahead. I’m not stopping you. This is my son’s room and I will stand where I want in my house.”
She was stuck, well and truly stuck.
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Excellent, realistic writing. Thanks for following my blog. Following back. ๐
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Thank you Jennifer … I love meeting new writing buddies here. Thank you for your comment and your follow. Happy Spring ๐ธ
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I loved it. Suspenseful and real
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Thank you for popping over and having a read ๐ซ๐ฅ๐ค
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It reminded me of a saying
the line the good and evil doesn’t pass through states nor between classes Nor political parties either but through the human heart it leads me to wonder what series of events took place so that man would be so cruel
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Oh man I’m feeling especially motivated tonight to write and to draw after reading the letter to the artists in which it reads ‘ on threshold of the 3rd millennium My hope for you all who are artists is that you will have an especially intense experience of creative inspiration it is the beauty which pass on to Generations still to come be so much that it will stir them to wonder , faced with the sacredness of life and the human person and before the marvels of the universe wonder is the only appropriate attitude . From this wonder there can come from which no one has spoken its poem . People of today and tomorrow will need this enthusiasm if they are to meet a mass of crucial challenges which stand before us ”
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Iโm pleased it evoked a reaction in you; even though you lost me towards the end ๐คฃ๐
Had there been actions preceding this scene, a calm adult to adult conversation across the kitchen table over a bowl of chips wouldnโt really have made an emotive story would it!! ๐
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Oh this is so dark, but very good. I love her strength and self protection despite her hammering heart. I hate him and the alcohol he consumes. A brilliant response to the word prompt x
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Thanks Anna… I wanted it to sound sinister and most readers felt that ๐๐ฅ
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That was great!!!!! So scary!!!!! You are fiercely talented!!!!!
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Aw Patty; darling โบ๏ธ youโve made me shy … thank you so so much ..
this is gonna cost me a fortune in snuggly fleeces to wrap my ladies up in after reading ๐คฃ๐ธ๐ฆ
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A tad creepy, in a good way. Moving out of the comfort zone, romantic fiction wise?
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I know!!!!!
What am I up to ๐คฃ
Would this be classed as domestic noir? I think so …
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Very unsettling, and slightly terrifying. You tell it so well, it gave me chills x
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๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐ฅdelighted the sinister vibe came across … mwah!
Now turn the lights on and have a mug of tea ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ค
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Great story,greatly written and with a mesmerizing scary sharp angle.
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Thatโs a unique description of how it made you feel… I keep straying into thriller territory within my WIP, yet am fighting its inclusion in an attempt to keep the novel lighter. But perhaps if my writing lends itself to the dark side, I should include it ๐๐ฅ
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May be u should๐ฅ
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Great story Viola,
the morning is smarter then evening ,right
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Too right..
Pleased you enjoyed it โบ๏ธ
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Love it ๐
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๐๐ผ๐๐ผ did it have a scary edge?! ๐๐ผ
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Definitely and made me very uncomfortable ๐
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Oh great!
But now hereโs a cuddly fleece and a hot chocolate to make you feel warm and safe again ๐ค๐ธ๐ฆ
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lovely ๐
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