FINAL MOMENT – dark poem
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Whooshing in my ears, what’s that?
Blurred vision but a lighter space ahead.
Wall cold, damp with condensation,
Slides away beneath desperate fingertips.
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Slow trickle of warm liquid down my cheek,
Teeth clatter as gasping breaths escape.
Knees find splinters on old floorboards,
Keep going before the next blow comes.
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Ankles twisted and raw against the rope,
New tears increase the blindness.
A groan from behind, he’s not dead,
I should have used more force.
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Round the corner, crawling, a kitchen.
Broken chair where it started.
I hear a thud, ‘Fuck you bitch’
Reach for the chair leg, shaking fingers.
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Ice cold on my head, water, the vase,
Pungent stems drop around me.
Weapon grabbed, I turn on my back,
He lunges and drops; into his neck,
It pierces his skin as his voice does the air.
Fury from somewhere deep comes.
I stay focused and twist it more.
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oooh, where did that come from? Too much cheese Grommit.
Cup of milky tea anyone; sugar for shock? 🤣🙈
I’ve even got custard creams.
(Shall delete if less than 10 likes by midnight, pwonise 💋)
All Right! Woo Hoo! Go big or go home!
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😂😘🌸💃🏼
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Dark indeed but with a bit of humor……brilliant👏🏻
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Mwah …. keep fingers crossed that the book arrives tomorrow 🙈🙄
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I suppose first discussion will start next week😉obviously women have different tempistica then men😂have a good day dear❤️
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The minute the damn thing arrives, I shall stand on the driveway and read the first chapter!!!
You too darling .. x
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Nowt wrong with a little darkness. Nice.
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Chink glasses then .. thank you for your approval!
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It’s good to let the dark ideas flow out now and again!
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Tee hee .. better out than in as they say! I sometimes shock myself though …
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Now you have eleven likes so you can’t delete it 😘. So good, loved it. xx
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Thank you Mai!!
Ok, I’ll leave it … in glad there are readers who do like a little dark moment in a book … x
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Yikes! Enough with the threats already. 😉
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🤣 here’s your tea and biscuit 🤗
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Mm, mmm, delish! Thanks!
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Loved this!!!! Wow!!!!! Intense!!!!! 🙂
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Darling – I’m so pleased you did read it (here; your tea and biscuit) … thank you for bearing with me and my funny dark maggot moments 🤣🤣🤣😘
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Of course, I would read it. I’m a risk taker and a fan! 🙂 Really loved it!!!! Scary!!!! Well written!!!!!
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Yay 💫💃🏼
You’re my number 1 fan xx
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